Walt: we are writing about our holiday recount.
We are supposed to write about what we did in the holidays.
my favorite part was putting in the background.
the hardest part was doing some of the writing.
maybe next time I could add a bit more details.
Kia ora Nikau, I really like the presentation of your Holiday recount and how you put in the effort to include a background, a coloured text box and easy to read text. You did well to write a descriptive recount using paragraphs and some of the five senses. Maybe next time try to write using Show, Don't tell, proofreading and punctuation. Keep up the good effort Nikau! Blog ya later, Ms Peters.
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ReplyDeleteIt's Hunter from your class. Your holiday recount was cool as, I really want to watch the new Space Jam! Maybe next time you could turn it into a google drawing. Ka pai.
Kia ora there Hunter I really liked your positive and nice comment that you have put on my blog. Maybe next time I might turn it into a google drawing. Thanks for the good comment and for this advise. Blog ya later.
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