Kia ora! I am a Year 6 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Nikau, I like the recount you wrote about your End of year trip. It's interesting and the photo you chose suits your writing well. It sounds like you had a super cool time. Maybe you could check your spelling and punctuation. Ka rawe! Ms Peters.
Kia ora Nikau,
ReplyDeleteI like the recount you wrote about your End of year trip. It's interesting and the photo you chose suits your writing well. It sounds like you had a super cool time. Maybe you could check your spelling and punctuation. Ka rawe! Ms Peters.