Kia ora! I am a Year 6 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hello Nikau my name is Nicholas and am 11 years old, I like how you did your research about Sir Edmund Hillary. Next time maybe you could make the font bigger so it is easier to read and fills up the page. I like how you organised the infomation into sections under headings. I didn't know he died so old or that he had two relation ships or 3 children. Maybe you could add more infomation about his life or how climbing Mount Everest felt for him. Here is my blog if you want to check it out. https://wpsnicholasco.blogspot.com/ Blog ya latter.
Hi my name is Yousuf from Waikowhai Primary School. I liked how you wrote about sir Edmund Hillary and when he died. I learned a lot of stuff like his age, when he died and that he died in Auckland Hospital, New Zealand. Your blog had really interesting facts about Sir Edmund Hillary. Maybe next time you could add some photos of sir Edmund Hillary to show who it is. I remember when I had to learn about someone that is famous in class and that person was a cricket player Kane Williamson. You could also check out my blog here at http://wpsyousufs.blogspot.com/2018/01/welcome.html#comment-form Blog you later!
HI Nikau My name is Dev from Waikowhai Primary School and I like your blog because I like Edmund Percival Hillary and you have told me lots of information about him. I like Perseverance in Exceptional Kiwis as it is fun to find new information. Maybe next time you can do other exceptional Kiwis that people can learn about. I once searched up Sir Edmund Hillary for my learning as well. It would be good if next time you can add a photo of him to show everyone who he is. Thanks for sharing! Blog ya later!
Hello Nikau my name is Nicholas and am 11 years old, I like how you did your research about Sir Edmund Hillary. Next time maybe you could make the font bigger so it is easier to read and fills up the page. I like how you organised the infomation into sections under headings. I didn't know he died so old or that he had two relation ships or 3 children. Maybe you could add more infomation about his life or how climbing Mount Everest felt for him. Here is my blog if you want to check it out. https://wpsnicholasco.blogspot.com/
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Hi my name is Yousuf from Waikowhai Primary School. I liked how you wrote about sir Edmund Hillary and when he died. I learned a lot of stuff like his age, when he died and that he died in Auckland Hospital, New Zealand. Your blog had really interesting facts about Sir Edmund Hillary. Maybe next time you could add some photos of sir Edmund Hillary to show who it is. I remember when I had to learn about someone that is famous in class and that person was a cricket player Kane Williamson. You could also check out my blog here at http://wpsyousufs.blogspot.com/2018/01/welcome.html#comment-form
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HI Nikau My name is Dev from Waikowhai Primary School and I like your blog because I like Edmund Percival Hillary and you have told me lots of information about him. I like Perseverance in Exceptional Kiwis as it is fun to find new information. Maybe next time you can do other exceptional Kiwis that people can learn about. I once searched up Sir Edmund Hillary for my learning as well. It would be good if next time you can add a photo of him to show everyone who he is. Thanks for sharing! Blog ya later!
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